Final Assignment-Rewrite the Ending
I will be rewriting a few parts of the story and ending of, Orpheus Takes a Solo.In the original story Eurydice dies and Orpheus ventures to the underworld but fails to retrieve Eurydice, after this he is torn apart by Maenads. But in this rewritten version by me of course, it will be much different to the original.
Orpheus is first born with no musical talent every time he sang the weapons around him would bend or shatter. The spear would go all bendy, the swords all chipped and rusty; he was even told to never sing again. Orpheus lived his entire life completely uneventful besides all the criticism he faced from a child born from two significant people but the result was someone with no chance in the arts of performing or wielding a sword. He was unwilling to make an effort until a lady so beautiful and dazzling entered his life Eurydice, a gorgeous nymph so fair the light would reflect her skin was as fine as glass.
Once procrastinating Orpheus started putting in an effort just so Eurydice will glance at him for at least 3 seconds.
He picked up a sword and practised for hours and hours till his hands were blistering and sweaty. He was training from dusk to dawn. He even tried to fix his horrid voice, he even begged his mother for music lessons. Calliope reluctantly agreed to his son’s request; she knew the path Orpheus picked would be a tough one. He spent months singing and practising the sword until after 1 year he was barely recognisable, his physique was impressive, his voice was majestic.
All his effort that he put into impressing Eurydice was pointless; she was already gone, gone from the face of the earth. Sadness enveloped Orpheus he prayed to the temple of Apollo for help prayers were answered the god appeared before him and offered his lyre to Orpheus telling him not to fight with violence not a spear, bow or sword but with the calming sound of music.
This was bad Orpheus had never played with a lyre before no one had there was only one in the whole world and that was Apollo’s. When he approached the river Styx he asked Charon if he could get a ride across but no response, Orpheus began to play the lyre the most terrible sounds were produced. “OK, ok I’ll ferry you across just stop playing”. Shrieking Charon, Orpheus had done the same thing with Cerberus before he arrived at the Styx.
He would not be getting the same results from Hades as soon as he played the lyre in front of him he was silenced. Hades also gave him a special punishment in the field of punishment to listen to loud horrible sounds for all eternity.
I think this task was really challenging my creative liberties I got to change the story to my liking, such as character attributes skills and decisions. I picked this task because the other ones didn’t really fit my circumstance or weren’t to my liking. The task itself was easy but having to come up with ideas on the spot is very difficult this was probably the problem.